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gone
Contributed by
k_kelly
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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mentally murdered by society
he was tore up from the inside out
always coming home crying
then when the question was asked "whats wrong"
he always seemed to be lying
the sun was setting on him
when it was just suppose to be rising
this wasnt something he could deal with
emotionally he felt he was being stabbed
with his own knife
cause he wasnt happy with him
so where is he now?
right in his bed
physically dead!!!!
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k_kelly
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2004-12-27 18:59:33]
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Re: gone
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:07:56 PM AEST
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This is sad but good.
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Re: gone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:21:07 PM AEST
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| this is awesome, except for the last two lines, they make this masterpiece sound some-what.. childish? anyway, great write!!! |
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Re: gone
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by Lurking_Shadow on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:23:31 PM AEST
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| wow, this poem is very deep. It gave me goosebumps, which is a good thing =) |
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