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pricks of poison
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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the needles scrape along my skin
the drugs intoxicate me
my body a servent to the abuse
absorbing every little sin
pricks of poison run into my veins
im flushed
i know its wrong
but i carry on
empty bottles
tablets at my feet
the rats will eat my flesh
when iam dead i will arrive in the firey hell
creatures of darkness will spit on me
the dark lord will welcome me
such abuse
such anger
is raw evil
ive killed my soul
driven it away
it will rest with God
while i shall be at 'his' feet eternal pain
bowing
asking for forgiveness..forever
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2004-12-28 08:42:38]
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Re: pricks of poison
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:29:20 PM AEST
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the needles scrape along my skin
the drugs intoxicate me
my body a servent to the abuse
absorbing every little sin
pricks of poison run into my veins
im flushed
i know its wrong
but i carry on
empty bottles
tablets at my feet
I like this, but after that I get a little lost. And I am not quite sure what you are writing about. Drugs, but what kind? But like I said I really do like the first half. |
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