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I'm Tired
Contributed by
coolsmcniel
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Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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Im tired
tired of waiting
so tired
tired of praying.
Im tired
tired of wanting
so tired
tired of crawling.
Im tired
tired of crying
so tired
tired of dying.
Im tired
tired of needing
so tired
tired of breathing.
But the thing that tires me most,
Is not being tired of loving you.
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2002-12-01 10:00:00]
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Re: I'm Tired
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by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:50:55 PM AEST
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Wow this is beautifully written
i enjoyed this one alot ...the end
of this poem makes it wonderful
Thanks for sharing this one...
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: I'm Tired
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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Aww I love the end of this! It's so unhappy and then love conquers all! It's like a fairy tale! lol, don't mind me, I'm just one of those hopeless romantics that's more in love with the idea of love than anything else. Which is why I love this poem! I think it's really awesomely done. Great job!
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