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we're meant for eachother
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:26:36 PM in AEST
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everyone says
we were meant for echother
maybe there right
we are meant for one another
it has to be true
we're a perfect match
we stand out like roses
in a dandelion patch
it took so long
for me to see
that you and me
were meant to be
your passionate face
is what keeps my heart going
your warm touch
is what keeps my blood flowing
your affectionate smile
so very soothing
your loving laugh
so very moving
maybe someday
we'll be together
i hope that day
will last forever
Copyright ©
sek-c-shaun
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2004-12-28 18:26:36]
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:43:35 PM AEST
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I liked it. Keep writing!
Jeni |
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by punkhead13 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:20:46 PM AEST
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| This of the best one i have read today. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:53:26 PM AEST
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i like how it all leads into the last line. if i had writen this, it would have been that i had that 1 though, and wrote a poem around it. and i like how i can relate to it an purely professional sence as well.
writen in an hour? how long do u usally take? mine are normally done in about 20min to an hour max...is that weird? |
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by hoidy on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:27:15 PM AEST
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Wow! I really liked it! I love your style keep up the great work.
- hoidy |
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:38:55 AM AEST
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Aww this is such a sweet romantic write! Great job.
"we're a perfect match
we stand out like roses
in a dandelion patch"
My favorite line :-) |
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Re: we're meant for eachother
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:55:35 AM AEST
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| another romantic write...ur great at this!!!! i love it |
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