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A white rose
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:30:01 PM in AEST
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My world
Clouded and grey
I walked alone for years
Lost and cold
A white rose lost in the middle of a red rose patch
Now not feeling alone
I sit and stare at the white rose
So beautiful
So peaceful
Swaying so freely
Standing out amongst the others
Standing alone
Standing proud
Giving me a reason to fight back
Like the rose I'll stand proud
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Re: A white rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:46:20 PM AEST
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| ahh i love this. portays so well, that moment when u actually become proud of what u are so well. oo im all happy now. thats an achivement well done |
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Re: A white rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:53:02 PM AEST
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The metaphor is nice but a little confusing. If the white rose is you, does that mean you sit and stare at yourself? But other than that, it's nice and I like the last two lines.
Cheers! |
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Re: A white rose
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:00:18 PM AEST
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| I have to tell you, im pretty critical when it comes to poetry. I find myself at difficulty to except the beauty of a poem if it doesn't have a special "quirky orginality" to it. (If that makes any sense). This poem really hit me upside the head and forced me to take notice. Its a breath of fresh air. Thank you. |
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Re: A white rose
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:53:29 PM AEST
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| interesting poem. i had a similar poem about a rose. i think it was without any sin. great write. |
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Re: A white rose
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:11:15 PM AEST
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This poem is really good, I like the symbolism with the white rose refering to yourself, I feel the same way at times. Keep up the great work.
shannon |
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Re: A white rose
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:37:27 PM AEST
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| I like this, finally realizing being unique is great.. |
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Re: A white rose
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:49:43 AM AEST
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awesome write willie,i'm glad u've realized that ur something,and u've always have been,keep up the awesome writes,ttyl
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Re: A white rose
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by penguin69 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 12:09:59 AM AEST
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| this poem has meaning and understanding about how most people feel. and it's just great reading |
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