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Renovators Delight
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:05:45 PM in AEST
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Modest rooms, solid floor
Just come and knock on any door
Low maintenance, foundations deep
Silent comfort to help you sleep
Warmth against cold winters chill
Cushions on the window sill
A perfect aspect for growing old
Privacy if youre feeling bold
A stoop for your tired feet
A Feng Shui flow for Summers heat
Ambience and space to breathe
Youll never ever want to leave
Its clear it needs a little repair
But will respond to loving care
Youll fall in love I guarantee
And yes, of course, the house is.
Me.
Copyright ©
spike
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2004-12-28 20:05:45]
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Re: Renovators Delight
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:12:37 PM AEST
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Oh that's cute! My house is exotic, open and airy. With lots of fans. lol (Not sure what that means!)
Anyway, I *love* the metaphor!
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Re: Renovators Delight
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:23:04 PM AEST
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| very cute. You made the words flow so easily! |
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Re: Renovators Delight
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:32:14 PM AEST
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Different for you... I think.
The metaphor is interesting. Why is it that real estate agents always talk about the number of rooms, the hard wood floors, and all those foolish luxuries like swimming pools and jacuzzi tubs--- but forget all about the ambience? People often do a similar thing when meeting someone new... it's not so very different, I guess. And maybe... that's the point.
Wondering what sort of house I'd be,
SNM
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Re: Renovators Delight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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| LoL...I love it! So creative! :-) |
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