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Mark
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O7NeVeS
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:24:00 PM in AEST
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What is it that you see
When you look back at Junior High?
Do you ever see me
Or only when I walk on by?
Can you see my pain
And how Id die for your touch?
Or do you see your own
And how youd die for someone else, just as much?
Ive let you in my heart, many times before
And now it seems, I want you more and more
I long for you to let me in
I keep knocking asking to come in
But your heart is never home
And when it is its all alone
You say Im just a friend
And thats when I know its at an end.
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O7NeVeS
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Re: Mark
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:29:39 PM AEST
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| It's hard when the person you're crazy about only thinks of you as a friend. I've been there before. Good poem. :-) |
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Re: Mark
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by Dec2three198five on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:27:12 PM AEST
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| I think I read this before on one of your away messages. So far I have read 5 out of 6 poems. All of them are good but i love this one. It describes what i'm feelin word for word. Keep writin. Henry33 |
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Re: Mark
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by breny on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:09:40 PM AEST
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what a bummer. well we've all been there before i guess it's one of those crappy things that happens no matter what. everyone goes through it at least once. good job :-D
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Re: Mark
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by weezer21 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:33:24 PM AEST
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wow that was great..i know i've been their before.....mann guys suck ass don't they?? well anywayy...i hope all goes well..great poem
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Re: Mark
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:05:44 AM AEST
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i can relate to this one more then ever, the "we're just friends" thing is the worst when you really care about someone, i feel your pain :)
Curtis |
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