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I Love you, I Hate you
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:22:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I love you
yet I hate you
I long to feel the warmth of your kiss
to surround me in undying bliss
Yet I long to end your life as well
and curse you to the fate of hell
I love you
yet I hate you
I lust to be held in your arms
and to be protected from all harm
Yet I lust to hear youre tormented cries
as youre life flashes before your eyes
I love you
yet I hate you
I yearn to feel your tender caress
and I shall expect no less
Yet I also yearn to suck you dry
of the soul that within you lies
I love you
yet I hate you
I long to be with you through my life
and watch you protect me from strife
Yet I long to watch you slowly die
with the death brought to you by I
I love you
yet I hate you
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EternalNight4x
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2004-12-29 11:22:59]
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Re: I Love you, I Hate you
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:27:50 AM AEST
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they say theres a thin line between love and hate, a great emotional write
pixie xx |
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Re: I Love you, I Hate you
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:38:07 AM AEST
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Oh this so digs into my emotions and shows me what I feel sometimes at home! Pixie's right though, there is such a fine line between love and hate ... perhaps it is that we love to hate, or we hate to love, even both for that matter. Excellent.
peace
TS |
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Re: I Love you, I Hate you
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:45:39 AM AEST
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| This remindes me of my strange affection with this guy who hates me. He kicks me and says things about me. But he sent me a carnation with our schools weird celebration of "Secret Sweetheart" AND asked to slowdance with me. And I am scared to say I might be falling for him. GREAT POEM! |
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Re: I Love you, I Hate you
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:49:55 AM AEST
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| definantly reminds me of three days grace, i hate everything about you. excellent write. nice rhymes and flow. |
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