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Green Commands
Contributed by
SlimStaple
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:30:29 PM in AEST
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Commands in green letters
Burn across my mind
But I only obey purple
So Ill just listen to the words of love
Gods tree sits upon my wall
Red, green and orange
But Gods tree doesnt matter to me
So I turn my back on it
Rainbow, gold and elves to lay my head on
Well dreams take me away
But I prefer the storm to the rainbow
So give me showers, not elves and gold.
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2004-12-29 12:30:29]
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Re: Green Commands
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:40:05 PM AEST
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You've quite the imaginative
free verse! These are some
very mysterious lines of poetry.
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Re: Green Commands
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:03:50 PM AEST
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| i like this alot, its very interesting... |
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