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Hello World
Contributed by
Sk8ergrl_911
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:55:17 PM in AEST
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Hello World
Hello world how are you today?
are the people still causing you pain with the stuff they put into you?
are they still causing polution without care or distress?
are they yelling at the top of their lungs and making you deph?
Hello world how are you today?
are your plants becoming extinct?
are your animals in danger?
are your seas turning into dark skies?
are your lungs collapsing?
Hello world,
Mabye tommorrow will be better.
Copyright ©
Sk8ergrl_911
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2004-12-29 12:55:17]
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Re: Hello World
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
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| Well done, I like the way you did this. |
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Re: Hello World
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:07:20 PM AEST
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| not bad and its not too stupid just out there good write |
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Re: Hello World
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:59:42 PM AEST
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| good poem, and yes boredom is the greatest muse... |
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Re: Hello World
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:03:20 PM AEST
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| Great write...It's different and creative. :-) |
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Re: Hello World
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:21:16 PM AEST
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| Thank ya'll so much for telling me what ya thought! It means a lot to hear what others have to say! |
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Re: Hello World
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:20:12 PM AEST
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Poor world!!! I like the last stanza a lot :-)
cat xx |
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Re: Hello World
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:27 PM AEST
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| i liked how you did this too. i dont think tomorrow will be better. it just seems to get worse. |
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Re: Hello World
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:13:46 PM AEST
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Nice.
Spazzo |
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