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No More Kisses
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:29:55 PM in AEST
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No more kisses under the mistletoe,
Why oh why did Xmas have to go,
It has left without so much as a word,
Its left my heart feeling somewhat blurred.
Will I ever taste your sweet lips again?
Will you be here to take away my pain?
Or is that it have I had my fill?
Does my heart now have to pick up the bill?
Cuddles are a distant memory,
Things that you have given to me,
I remember them so well,
But thinking of them feels like hell.
I touch my lips & the pain seers,
In the aftermath of love comes the tears,
Just to think next to me was you,
No youre not & Im left with a feeling of blue.
You held my hand it felt so great,
As soon as you leave my heart does break,
I just wish you were here,
Bring back to me some of my lifes cheer.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-29 13:29:55]
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Re: No More Kisses
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:45:39 PM AEST
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emotions are expressed well in this poem.
Well done |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:20:58 PM AEST
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written with such ache I felt the pain in this
and I can relate to this... to some extent
anyway. I loved how this was written it
touched me. I'm back now so I hope we can
chat again soon.
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Re: No More Kisses
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by english-pea-pelter on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:45:07 PM AEST
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well done! relation in the highest extent.. thanks for commenting me on my poem..
peace out ^_^ V
english-pea-pelter |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:51:24 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:55:56 PM AEST
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Touched with sadness Pixie
Yet an excellent poem
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:13:24 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional poem, pixie. excellent rhymes and flow as always. |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:37:10 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad but powerful write. Great job. I really liked it! :-) |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by killingmehslowly on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:14:42 PM AEST
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| emotional and flowing. I can kind of relate...ache and wanting are things i know well. i love it. great job -Sami- |
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Re: No More Kisses
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:27:25 AM AEST
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Again love related with heart felt emotions. You seem to have a great deal of talent, with the emphasis on love and relationship issues. Perfect for poetry.
Good job
Willofree |
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