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three little words
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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our eyes meet
as well as our lips
i can feel you tremble
through my finger tips
a million things
racing through my mind
and i guess that means
our love is one of a kind
now when i hold you
i feel so warm inside
so dont be afraid
theres nothing to hide
for i'm the one who caught you
when you fell from above
i'm the one who cared for you
when you needed my love
your the only one
that i really care for
your the only one
that i'm really there for
with a lifetime of memories
all i can do
is say three little words
i love you
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Re: three little words
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:19:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
Your love poems are just so great. You have a real talent! :-) |
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Re: three little words
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by dolly_dagger on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:26:18 PM AEST
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awww this is pretty!
beautiful, simple and powerful.
good write
xxxx |
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Re: three little words
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:40:55 PM AEST
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beautifully written
Well done |
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Re: three little words
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:39:22 PM AEST
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| three little words... are you kidding me? those words are HUGE! 'i love you' is like... i dunno, asia! it's HUGE! as is the BRILLIANCE of this poem. very well done. |
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Re: three little words
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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I love this. The simpleness of the poem just adds to its beauty. Brilliant.
cat xx |
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