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He Is
Contributed by
Jamals_babie_gurl_69
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:46:06 PM in AEST
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He is the air I breathe, the water I drink, the tears in my eyes that run down my cheeks. He is the heartbeat that keeps me alive, the brilliant mind that keeps me thinking, the one that shows me what love is. But most of all He is the PAIN that makes me want to give up, the heartbreak that makes me wonder if life is worth living and the thoughts that keep me awake in tears at night. He is the only one that can break my heart this way. He is my Clay-ton.
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Re: He Is
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:48:48 PM AEST
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| Sad but powerful write. |
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Re: He Is
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:50:06 PM AEST
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| everything has a price, as ive said over one hundred times. the point is, is what he does worth the price? |
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Re: He Is
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:14:00 PM AEST
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| This is good, but I felt it needed more.. |
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Re: He Is
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:30:42 PM AEST
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| this is one of those things that leaves me wanting more... good write! |
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Re: He Is
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:35:02 PM AEST
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I know this. It is a pain that all of us feel when we are in love and have been rejected. Ive never been able to write about it, but you have written about it perfectly. Well done. I respect you as a poet and as a person.
Things will get better soon, I promise.
cat xx |
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