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Red
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:51:55 PM in AEST
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Red
Its the color of love
The color or pain
The color of her hair
Its the color of anger
Its my favorite color
Red
Its a beautiful rose
The color of the pain I feel
The color of the ribbon in her hair
Its the color of my face when she walks away
Its my blood dripping to the ground
Red
Its whats in our hearts
The color I see when my heads bashed in
The color of her hair spreading across my face
Its the color of our hands after a huge fight
Its the blood splattered on the walls
Red
Its the color of our love for each other
The color of our hearts tearing apart
The color of whats left of your hair
Its the color stained in my clothes
Its the color of her blood drying on my face
Red
Its all thats left here for you to see
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Re: Red
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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Red.
Well... I think of the blind guy that lives down the road.... LOL
Anyway... u've written a great lil poem here... filled with alot of emotion and raw images... The reader can definitely visualize this in the mind's eye... keep up the good work!
~Donna~
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Re: Red
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:43:17 PM AEST
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| awesome write willie,its full of confused emotions,loved it,and i love u even more |
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Re: Red
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:34:53 PM AEST
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| powerful poem. though some words need to be less used. |
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Re: Red
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:34:54 PM AEST
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to be perfectly honest willie i dont know what to think,its very interesting and heartfelt and well i think it freaken rocks man.keep up the great job!!
cheech |
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Re: Red
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:13:19 PM AEST
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| awesome. powerful is a good word for this. red is my favourite colour too, lol. |
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Re: Red
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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| great poem, although I think you used some words and descriptions too much |
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