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All in my Mind
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:57:26 PM in AEST
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I love you, i'm sure that I do
So why can't I talk to you
Everytime I try we get in a fight
I'm starting to wonder if you're sick of my sight
I wish I could share
But I get the feeling that you just don't care
I want this to work
But you have to overlook my quirks
You don't really try to comfort my fears
Nor do you ever wipe away my tears
You say that you love me
I know that it's true
Maybe I'm just being unfair
You hug me, you love me
It's obvious you care
You can be loving, You can be kind
It must all be in my messed up little mind
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Re: All in my Mind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:14:31 PM AEST
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It isnt just you..love is confusing as hell..lol
very well done
Larry |
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Re: All in my Mind
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST
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| t'was a good one sami, I'm glad you finally have one that's... different... from the rest... if only by a little |
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Re: All in my Mind
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:32:45 PM AEST
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| i loved this, especially the ending. =] |
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Re: All in my Mind
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by weezer21 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:20:53 AM AEST
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| love is sOO confusing...this was a great poem because i'm sure so many people could relate to it |
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Re: All in my Mind
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:58:56 PM AEST
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| Love is an emotion no one can read. Very good write. |
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