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WHEN I'M WITH YOU
Contributed by
goofyone
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:38:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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WHEN I M WITH YOU
Is it the calm I feel when I'm with you?
Or the way we feel at ease
Is it acceptance of each other?
Our thoughts, our hopes, our fears?
The desire to be together
To share, to open up Not to be afraid
The desire to just be loved
The way we can talk together
The touch of your gentle hands
The beating of my heart when I hear you speak
I cant even describe how I feel when we kiss
I know I'll be hurt if we must ever part
so I pray I'll never see that day
I dont know how to thank you for this
Maybe it's not any of these.
But I want you to know that these feelings are real
and with you is where I want to be
goofyone
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2004-12-29 21:38:22]
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Re: WHEN I'M WITH YOU
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:13:51 PM AEST
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| beautifaul, impressive write. i can totally relate to how someone can make u feel this way...comfortable at ease and u feel beautiful when u are loved. well done |
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