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To My Unborn Daughter
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:40:21 PM in AEST
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{some of u's already know that in my life my father doesnt exsist,but in away he does,to me hes dead but he lives on through me,he left me a special girft and that is what i share with everyone each and everyday with all my words,if u leave a comment please dont be mean,thanx}
I'm very and deeply sorry
that i've left and gone
I know life for you will be blurry
Eventhough i'm not there,your life will never be done
You'd be better off without me
I'm doing this for your brothers and you
If you dont see why,eventually you will see
Be smarter then me,always know what to do
Believe me Rodney,I feel really bad
I'll never get to hear your beautiful laugh
and i'm the father you'll never get to have
don't be sad,just think your father has gone mad
It's not your fault,but in away
it has everything to do with you
I'm sorry my unborn daughter,but i must go today
I will always love you,please know it's true
To my unborn daughter
Your life I will not bother
i'm sorry I could not be a-there-father
for your brothers and you,take care of your mother
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:46:16 PM AEST
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no matter what i say about ur dad it'll always be mean,he didnt even try,he was never around to even try to help ur mother or ur brothers or u in life,i'm sorry if this seemed mean,but i had to say it,but its a nice poem and yes he did leave a gift but he also left a gifted girl and thats u rodney,love ya
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST
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| i can see where you got the talent to write poetry/songs =] this was a really sweet poem. |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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| Good write and i wont be mean like u i dont know him |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:05:03 PM AEST
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| wow.... how sad |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:41:02 PM AEST
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| that comes straight from the heart. |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:07:23 PM AEST
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| awww this was really sad and im soo sorry you had to grow up without a father...but i think its beauitiful he left you with such a beautiful keepsake to remember him and cherish him by......lovely. |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:14:06 PM AEST
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| OMG This was so sad it really hit me hard! How wonderful that you have this to keep in your heart! Christina |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:38:58 AM AEST
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This is such a sad, beautiful, poetic and heartwarming poem. Thanks for sharing this.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 06:46:09 AM AEST
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There are those out there who think their families are better off without them and in some cases that is true - like with an abusive parent. Some either walk away, regretfully; or end their own lives due to severe depression. This is a heartwrenching write. Just watch your capitalization of I, a usual mistake I believe most of us make while typing quickly for our fingers are not always as fast as our minds.
peace
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:45:37 AM AEST
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awww that was very sad and emotional, a very moving write
pixie xx |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by Dri on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:42:22 PM AEST
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*sob* this is one of those that just tears at you...
also, as an aside, your dad had really good style. here is the internet version of a hug! *hug* |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by doodley_5 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:25:10 PM AEST
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| this is a very touching poem... im sorry for you because my father is my best friend.. i have a closer relationship with him than i do with any of my gurls... sorry.... |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by allforyou on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST
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| Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. My father is gone too. |
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Re: To My Unborn Daughter
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:55:36 AM AEST
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Savedbydeath
None of us know why your father wasn't there.Nothing bad should be said.Your poem left me with goose-bumps.What ever happen by leaving this poem he showed that he loved.You ment something and must have been special to him.
Always keep your father in your prayers.
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