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Hunger
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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passion like lightning
searing through
from the inside out
need engulfing tangible thought
eating away deliciously
at any resistance
gentle caresses send
shivers coursing the spine
to settle antangonizingly
close to ecstasy
wave after wave
of heated pleasure
courses through
body and mind
driving the animalistic need
for release
held on the brink
of ecstatic tension
until the world explodes
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-12-01 16:00:00]
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Re: Hunger
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 10:31:05 PM AEST
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Great imagery here...
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Re: Hunger
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:51:16 PM AEST
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I totally agree with Jenni here Candice,
It's one your hot ones that has me tingling all over.
Very well done with the imagery of pure passion. Cold shower time again!!Hehe
With love
Dean:-p |
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Re: Hunger
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:14:51 PM AEST
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Dean, This one was written one morning after I a had a dream about Shadow. I have a very good was of putting such thoughts down on paper or so my friends say.
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Re: Hunger
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:37:45 PM AEST
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I can only agree with them Candice, this being an example of you writing your thoughts. I like your dreams. PHEW!!!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Hunger
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:55:52 PM AEST
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Dean, My friends absolutely love the way i write things like this. They call every few days to see if I have anything new forr them to read.
I like my dreams!!!!!!!!!!! I can hardly remember a time when I haven't had a dream like the one this was written after.
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Re: Hunger
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 10:09:29 PM AEST
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Just imagine if you will Candice,
The day the time is right for you to say what you want to, these dreams will become reality! Think how much will you like that!
This day will come for you Candice, right again when you're least expecting it! Could be tomorrow? Nobody can tell yet!
Only Candice and Shadow will know the day after this day!
With love
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Re: Hunger
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 10:14:04 PM AEST
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Dean, I would really enjoy for my dreams to become reality. I have a feeling that one day i will get to live out all my dreams with him. I just have to tell him that I love him first, then after that who knows that will happen.
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