|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
What to do?
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:42:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
She is so wondrous
so beautiful
but I can't help myself
i have to ask these question of myself
could I ever love her?
could I grow old with her?
or am I just being stupid again,
another attempt at love pretend
I don't know
if I should just let this go
and forget about the whole thing
or if I should try to find an answer
As I lay here
and think
it's the companionship
it's the time we could spend together
the way she could hold me in her arms
that perfect sparkle in her eyes
her smile that compares to nothing else
is She the one I've waited for.
For I fell for her, and my heart spills.
Everything dark is now away.
The light she brought fulfills.
She makes me, takes me, and brighten's my days
Copyright ©
socialmisfit
... [
2004-12-30 02:42:35]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: What to do?
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:44:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very good poetry |
|
|
Re: What to do?
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:02:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A masterpeice 'cause I think we all have doubts from time to time. Keep writing as u know it helps.
hugs, smiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: What to do?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:13:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wonderful poem. I can definitely relate. Sounds like you do love her.
cat xx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
