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hate
Contributed by
krisseee
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:30:38 AM in AEST
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Destination nowhere, and i'm taking the scenic route,
Insignificant little dot, invisible to the world,
a mute
not even worth mother nature's energy to decompose me in the ground,
leaving me instead to walk the emptiness,
screaming, not making a sound
when my back was breaking, no one carried my cross
now i'm a million and one miles beyond help, it's too late
as if anyone would take the time to rescue me anyway
hate hate hate hate hate
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krisseee
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2004-12-30 07:30:38]
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Re: hate
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:55:24 AM AEST
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Brilliant writing. The only thing that let you down, in my opinion, was the ending
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Re: hate
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:55:35 PM AEST
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| the ending ruined it completly |
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Re: hate
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by weezer21 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 12:52:21 PM AEST
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it's great, emotional....very very good
but hate to say what everyoen else is saying...would have been much better with a different ending
-xx jessie xx- |
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