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Starting a new Lifeliving Alone with You
Contributed by
phirenize
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I'm sitting here watching T.V. with myself
occasional staring at your picture sitting on my shelf
No one to talk to or to share my day with
Your passion, laughter, and touch are just some things I miss
What else can I do to kill my blues
I know now what I must do
I have start my life over new
because it hurts too bad to live alone with you
I'm trying to make it day-to-day
I'm trying to think of another way
what does it matter because I think I've already left anyway
because it hurts too bad to live alone with you
When I met you I thought you were the one
I was convinced when you gave me my only son
the love for you in my heart weighs a ton
but now i have decided it must be done
because it hurts too bad to live alone with you
I never thought when you became my wife
that I would later be looking to start an new life
Copyright ©
phirenize
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2004-12-30 13:12:53]
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Re: Starting a new Lifeliving Alone with You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:08:22 PM AEST
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I think you meant "a new life" on that last line.
It hurts pretty bad when you have to spend your day by yourself when you'd rather be with someone. Very emotional write. |
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Re: Starting a new Lifeliving Alone with You
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by Phirenize on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:03:09 PM AEST
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Timebot - Thanks for the reponses. I can use all of the critisim I can get. As you can probably tell I am new to poetry but have always enjoyed it. I tryed to "paint the picture" of the title "living Alone with you" I am married to this woman and I feel that it hurts worse to be with someone and still feel alone even when you are sitting beside the her. I am moving on because of it.
hey, Have a Great New Year! |
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