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Under the stars
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You want to lay with me
Under the stars
So I'll carry you to the oak tree
Lay you down under the beautiful stars
Whispering in your ear kissing you softly on the neck
Yes you were special from the start
Sqeezeing you tightly
Pulling you closer to me
Pointing to stars and making shapes
Shapes of our unknown love
Your eyes seem clouded
Your love has faded
The oak is now tainted
It all started under the stars
It ended in the same place
Under the stars
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stonedraider23
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2004-12-30 13:47:20]
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Re: Under the stars
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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that was so beautiful, I love poems about stars :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Under the stars
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:01:38 PM AEST
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aww!sad but awesom write,sorry i aint on msn,i'm downloading some songs and it dont work if msn is running.anyways love ya 2,great write
ur hun bun |
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