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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
Joker17
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Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im Sorry - by J. Samuelson Copyright2001 01/22
Woke up today at three A.M.
Its now day three without you
Hung over, weak, and miserable
Cant hide my eyes, I tried to.
Be just another ice cold day
Still cant believe were through
Its freezing cold, Im all alone
With nothing left to cling to.
Last night I drank my anger
Today, Ill face my reality
Ill have to try to figure
What now is left here for me.
I must admit this to you
If ever, you should read this
I never shall forget you
You were my light in darkness.
Im not at all upset with you
Just dealing with my grief
I dont want you to think so
Im sorry you cant see.
I said some things I shouldnt
I hope you can understand
I released some of my tension
To help me comprehend.
I hate it that you walked out
I guess it was best for you
Im sorry that I wasnt all
You needed me to be to.
Im so sorry that I pushed you
For that, I take the blame
Im sorry that I pressured you
Im sorry, I drove you away.
Im sorry, I wasnt good enough
I did everything that I could
Im sorry you said goodbye to me
I now feel so misunderstood.
Im Sorry!!!
Copyright ©
Joker17
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2002-12-01 19:00:00]
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:04:06 PM AEST
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Wow this is so deep..
brought tears to my eyes....
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 09:03:26 PM AEST
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Joker, this was so sad, but well written. Your pain and remorse are well depicted...
Welcome to ypdc.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by LivingDeath on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:20:45 AM AEST
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oh yes.... it hurts,,,and it hurts a lot...
can't tell you what yo do or what to think...
cause i'm at the exact same situation...
but worst....i was the one that told her to leave...and later found that without her...
i just couldn't live.... be strong
you write the same kind of poetry that i write...
(mainly LOST LOVE POETRY)
so if you nedd to talk to someone....
i'm here...
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:53:39 AM AEST
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This is sad! Just remember, everything happens for a reason, and it all makes you who you are in the end, and it happens exactly as it's meant to. I like the line "You were my light in darkness" coz that's something I commonly say about my best friend. So it sort of gave me a personal link to your poem. I like it a lot. Well written, and very emotional.
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