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Run
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Run, run, run
Far away
For I dont want to see you
Come my way
Keep your grief
To yourself
For grief should stay
In ones self
Your grief and mine
Must not intertwine
Like vinegar and oil
Not meant to coil
I dont want to burden you
With problems I may have
Because by not telling you
I want you to be glad
I see no point
In sharing with you
For only talking about it
I still stay blue
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2004-12-30 16:44:32]
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Re: Run
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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| Very well written, especally for a first write! Hope to see more of your work! |
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Re: Run
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:23:54 PM AEST
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| very nice poem. i think i get what the poem is trying to say but not really quite sure. 33 |
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Re: Run
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:55:32 AM AEST
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this is impressive for the first poem you ever wrote, i hope your teacher recognized it too :) now we know how you got started with this wonderful hobby, its great isn't it?? nice one....
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