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places
Contributed by
bre
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:47:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If theres a better place u can take me a better life u can give
any place i can start all over i would never need what gave me,
and never need u to save me and never feel like this live is over.
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2004-12-30 17:47:44]
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Re: places
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 06:16:24 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem, a bit hard to read in this format...but well done! |
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Re: places
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:50:20 PM AEST
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| good write =] |
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