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Why I知 a Blast at Parties
Contributed by
blackevar
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:53:36 PM in AEST
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Writing teenage angst in my late 20s,
Listening to The Smiths,
With acne too,
God help me!
Has anything changed?
I was unhappy then,
Much as I am unhappy now,
Living in inertia,
One step forward,
One step back,
They say time heals,
Theyre wrong,
It merely passes,
Slowly and painfully,
Like urine
Through a swollen urethra,
Do you think Im depressed?
Im not really,
Just aware,
Theres a difference,
Depressives are deluded,
They Dream forlornly of a better life,
I know that there isnt,
Ive checked,
Looking left and right,
What can I say?
I can accept the logic of the green cross code,
And yet the oncoming traffic still looks so attractive
Copyright ﾂｩ
blackevar
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Re: Why I知 a Blast at Parties
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by Mitternachtmann on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:10:18 PM AEST
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| I would have never believed something with a title as this, as seemingly simple and free formated can be so...intriquing. As I was reading, I felt it. The last line is haunting and beautiful. Hey, I am one of those "depressives" you speak of and I am as far as being deluded as possible, and more shocked by this world and its ongoing nonsense, and yet in me there is still a spark somewhere, because I have felt eternity and happiness before...it exists...it is out there somewhere...I believe in it. Anyway, beautiful poem, in its own way. |
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Re: Why I知 a Blast at Parties
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by Blackevar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:11:13 PM AEST
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| Just to note the green cross code in Ireland is a way to teach Irish kids how to cross the road safely. |
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Re: Why I知 a Blast at Parties
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by Blackevar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:13:41 PM AEST
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Cheers man
Was just trying to imply everyone should be deppresed and anyone who wasn't just wasn't paying close enough attention!
Thanks for reading! |
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Re: Why I知 a Blast at Parties
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:33:19 PM AEST
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| i loved this =] |
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Re: Why I知 a Blast at Parties
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by arden on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:55:35 PM AEST
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interesting write.
i see your point of view and agree with most of this poem.
its well written and insightful.
i liked it.
loved the end lol
Arden |
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