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Amour oublié
Contributed by
rpnsk
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:56:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Amour oubli
Twisted smile, precarious steps, the
fresh, new double-entendre of her walk,
her beauty is unmade of this world, my
world in which I fall into her gaze, she
speaks but unspoken, pure water, sunless
winter: endless recherche du temps perdu
slow dulcimer, gavotte and bow, in autumn,
we make our way among the grey, the shallow
bridge of the gasoline-rainbow sparkles,
under her glove rests my hand, she drifts
away, soft rouge on cheek, a lovers
parting:
diu me captata est
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2004-12-31 06:56:37]
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Re: Amour oublié
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by shins on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 07:55:20 AM AEST
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| Wow, your poetry is astonishing - you capture so many emotions in such a small space, keep writing! |
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Re: Amour oublié
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 09:04:15 AM AEST
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I found this quite refreshing, being french and all, i really enjoyed the little pieces of french within your poem.
Bravo! Well done. |
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