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Night Creatures
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 12:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the shadows lurk night creatures,
These minions have the most hideous features,
If you saw them for even a split second,
Into the bowels of hell youd be beckoned.
No-one has ever seen one & lived to tell,
As I said before they ended up in hell,
Mentally unhinged from such a horrible sight,
A disturbing image that held their sanity tight.
There are many tales & many stories,
All of them so wicked & so very gory,
Fear wells up at the mention of their name,
Once in your head youll never be the same.
They skulk around begging for a victim,
All their thoughts are black & so grim,
They will devour your soul rip it to pieces,
Youll pray for death thatll be your only release.
So please dont dwell on your dark thoughts,
If you do your pure soul has just been bought,
By dark horrors known as night creatures,
Your heart will stop when you see their hideous features.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-31 12:39:16]
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Re: Night Creatures
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by afterdark on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 12:40:51 PM AEST
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| Great poem here this is one that i love it really works for me..I could definitly ***** after reading this one here.. |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by someone2004 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:02:24 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I like it!! |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by subchild on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:26:40 PM AEST
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| This is so gooood I love it |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by Kitty_cat on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 04:39:37 PM AEST
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chilling and very dark.
cat xx |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:58:54 PM AEST
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Oh, that espin the bottle guy
popped up above this poem...
but the naked blonde was at the bottom,
so my vomit did not come out
and I was able to read this
splendid poem of yours.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:23:57 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Night Creatures
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:03:47 PM AEST
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I am afraid it then, is far too late for me ... my dark thoughts are dealt, and dwelled upon often ... so cover me ... I guess I'm goin in or down as the case may be....
Nazzy ~ |
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