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So, Ask How It Feels
Contributed by
Joker17
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Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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So, Ask How It Feels - by J. Samuelson Copyright2001 01/21
So, ask how it feels to be driven
Down into the dirt where youre walking
No concept of where you are going
No words even heard when youre talking.
Just cast aside left in the bitterness
Your heart torn out, left you still bleeding
No chance to ask for a good reason
No pride left for begging and pleading.
Trampled and tossed away without care
Used and abused, only a second place
You were only kept as a distraction
Then watched it backfire in your face.
Intentions may not have be injury
What good does that really do me?
The point is you kept me hanging
It might as well been from a tree.
Youre leaving me in utter despair
I hope you think your better without me
I thank you for ruining my whole life
Now I wish you never had met me.
But fear not, as you wish, Im gone
Youll never know how much youve lost
You didnt give me a true chance with you
Im sure you feel much better off.
Ill leave you and still love you to death
I know you hate that, and wont ever accept it
Its not all that easy, this love Im letting go
Its not my fault youre the one who rejected.
No big deal, this is my life that has ended
Youll move forward, but just so you know
Ill always wonder why you did this to me
Why you wanted me, then told me to go.
So, Ask How It Feels to be shot down
Its the most vicious feeling to me
To give all the love you have in you
And be left with nothing but grief.
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Joker17
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2002-12-01 19:30:00]
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Re: So, Ask How It Feels
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:15:45 PM AEST
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| wow. well i certainly felt guilty reading this. ive been in this situation on both sides. not fun for either side. =/ you wrote this well and got your feelings across. i felt the anger. seems like thats mostly have ive read from you so far =] |
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