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Tiana
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:24:58 AM in AEST
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I miss you
I cry for you
I would take my life
and die for you
What is your name?
barrer of death?
"cancer"
is that my answer?
eleven years given to
her innocent soul
taken in an hour
to god it was sold
i watched the angels
take her away
Why did this have to happen today?
god give her guidence in her time of need
it's the least you can do since you took her away from me!!!!
I cry, and i cry alone
when children die they die alone...........
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Re: Tiana
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:31:14 AM AEST
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| powerful, emotional, and heart wrenching write. im sorry for your sister. |
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Re: Tiana
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:38:05 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Tiana
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by FirePrincess on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:36:30 PM AEST
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umm Lyssa...i am like ur best friend and i don't believe ur sister is dead...but if she were you would prolly be good at writin somethin about it. good poem thou...umm ttyl luv ya
~FirePrincess~ (Em) |
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