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My World
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:36:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Angel blue skies Teal green grass Pink blossed trees Big hungry eyes Gone my house of sash A piece of bread peeze In mothers arms a child dies Every cloud a silver lining Fields of golden grain Let freedom ring A thousand starving Sickness and hunger pains Gun shots bombs blasting Morning sunrise golden sunset Starlit night Venus and Mars Bodies burnt fires lit The world o'r so many fight Generations bare scars Nothing but blue skies Gentel comes the rain Sunrays and rainbow Tens of thousand die Eyes drained Bodies bloat Clear blue skies Peacefulness Doves music fills the air Thousands thousands ask why A child floats no last caress A hundred thousand die O'the sky so ever blue Birds sing loves tune A child a child is born A sip of water ever so cool Cries of a December morn Peaceful is a doves coo
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2005-01-01 05:36:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:47:08 AM AEST (User
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please Comment.
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Re: My World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sapphire_Blue on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:31:14 AM AEST (User
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| Excellent poem, loved the way it flowed and how each word you have chosen expressed the poem beautifully. cool write, thanx for sharing this. |
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Re: My World
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:23:54 PM AEST (User
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Good work. We should all care about our brothers and sisters around the world involved in the horrible tragedies that are occuring. So many lives lost, not just because of war but also nature. We must join hands and forces to aid these victims.
Blessings, Dove |
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