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The Broken-Hearted
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:49:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sweet, triumphant horror
please lift this plague
that you feel so obliged to bestow
and rather shower me with love
upon nightfall
the shadows creep within my soul
haunting my dreams
my thoughts, my movements
my body grows numb and cold
so I sit eager for hope
and as fallen petals do cry
the broken-hearted do weep
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2005-01-01 10:49:02]
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Re: The Broken-Hearted
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:52:18 PM AEST
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| Truly touching...very nice write...like the style.. |
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Re: The Broken-Hearted
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by coderkev88 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:11:22 PM AEST
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True, it's not the usual style you use when you write poems but still very good. Kind of makes me curious as to why you choose to write this style? Oh well, great poems none the less.
~ Kev |
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Re: The Broken-Hearted
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 07:24:17 AM AEST
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| Nothing better than to use Shakespeare as a style for poetry and I think this has produced a sensitive interesting write well written |
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