|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Secret Admirer 19
Contributed by
Lone_er
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Secret Admirer 19
The more I get to know her
The more I realize how truly exceptional she is
The more I understand the excellence of the mystery
So beautifully displayed in her eyes
Eyes that unwittingly seduce
In an innocent and gentle way
That both excite and humble
Secret admirers and trusted friends
My hearts set sail upon her blue ocean
Those currents of mystery beckoning in her eyes
Only the conflict of selfish desire and grace
Could confuse my direction
But of one thing I remain certain
The journey will be successful
And I shall stand amazed
At the wonder of her heart
Russ
Copyright ©
Lone_er
... [
2005-01-01 13:37:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Secret Admirer 19
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:24:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You really sound into this girl. I wish you luck. If you can speak half as well as your poetry, you don't need it! |
|
|
Re: Secret Admirer 19
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sir_Odd87 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:28:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I like that... I like that one a lot... I started with my girlfriend as a secret admirer... You do it justice...
|
|
|
Re: Secret Admirer 19
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 07:14:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love these and I do believe the journey will be a success
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Secret Admirer 19
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:01:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
No need to tell you how much I enjoy reading this series.......
Hugs and Happy New Year, Russ..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Secret Admirer 19
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:56:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow been missing out on all these good writes.
Beautifull write.
I'm trying to do some catching up.
Good work.
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
