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Love
Contributed by
breny
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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sometimes I wonder
if love is true
then I stop
and think of you
You're like an angel
that came into my life
you're mine, no one else's
and I hope one day I'm your wife
if love doesn't exsist
then what is it i feel?
everytime we've kissed
I've knnown our love is real
Hormones couldn't make me
feel the way that I do
In your arms is where I want to be
And I know you want me there too
so to all those in doubt
I hope I've helped you out
You'll soon get your turn
and soon you'll have the yearn
it will be like something
has come into your life
and you're afraid it will disappear
and leave you by yourself
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-01 14:24:51]
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:35:08 PM AEST
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| Oh wow!! It's fantastic...the ending I don't tink needs changed...just, needs something more.....I hope Brandon appreciates. |
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Re: Love
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:39:14 PM AEST
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| I think I'd be tempted to agree with my girlfriend on this one... fantastic! I hope he appreciates it, too, and I hope your dream of wedded happiness turns out as you hoped it would... |
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