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Contributed by
ravensfire
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:27:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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The eagle soars up in the sky, He catches the thermals the higher he flies. The beat of his wings the sun on his breast, As the feathers bend upon his crest. His talons extended his eyes are fierce, As if my soul he could pierce. Almost a bullet as he catches a breeze, He grabs his prey as their hearts freeze. Majestic this symbol of our country, As he soars with the clouds and will always be free !
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Re: none as yet.
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:02:50 PM AEST
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| This is good...a bit hard to get the whole effect while its in paragraph form...but well done! |
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by Solnubis on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:24:34 AM AEST
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| This was excellent. I could vision the whole scenery in my head. Your words describe percisely the path that this eagle is taking. I'm going to make a copy of it and show it to my son. The writing and words used makes this very interesting to read. |
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