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*+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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the_Ghost_Moth
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:33:52 PM in AEST
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Overdrive Velocity
acoustic demo
by Ghost Moth
it's still early in my dreams
and the spiders catch all the tangled signals
vibrating thru the tremorings
of distorted frequencies
of
dismantled burnt out parts of me
hotwired and unplugged,
disconnected,
broken-up and bugged
you're right, i don't hear you
can't you see i don't want to
tuned out too long
eyes snowed over by the song
played by a mind for deaf ears
is a sign of life one man hears
frustrated with the noise of animosity
destroyed in the surging overdrive velocity
that left me here
in the glow
of the light
from my radio
can't you see
i'm right where i want to be
close to the music
inside
the overdrive velocity
copyright 2004 the Ghost Moth
Copyright ©
the_Ghost_Moth
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2005-01-01 16:33:52]
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:43:59 PM AEST
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Taking a break from my site redo to look over your poem, Mothy. This is a good write. "frustrated with the noise of animosity" is my favorite line in here and something I feel all too often lately. Hope more postive feelings come to your surface.
Cheers!
J.
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:44:43 PM AEST
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This series now has my full attention...Excellence in it's highest form
Mason |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by pixie on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:41:05 AM AEST
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one word WOW!!!! :)
pixie xx |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:31:03 PM AEST
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Oh i really liked this one as well! It draws you in right from the start and doesn't fail to keep
you longing for more. A fast-paced read, and
great at that. I liked the lines:
"and the spiders catch all the tangled signals
vibrating thru the tremorings
of distorted frequencies"
I can't wait for more! You hooked me from the
start and never fail to amaze me. =) |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:54:37 AM AEST
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Hmnn.
I'm getting Mad Max on that lorry . . . wind in his matted hair . . . mad stare in his eyes . . .
Cool. |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:56:36 PM AEST
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Gee Em ... ? Dude, you Rrrrrrrrrock !!!
I wouldn't change a thing.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:47:29 PM AEST
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| I know this is a little late... But I wanted to tell you this was hot! I loved the way you composed it. It flowed so perfectly. Your writing definately has the power to take me somewhere else. Not many people can do that... You are, as I have said before, very talented! Loves ya! XOXOXOXOX |
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Re: *+Overdrive Velocity-*: Acoustic Demo (teaser)
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 09:25:33 PM AEST
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| If this is not a song I can make it into one. Let me know. Awesome write. I wished you'd post more poetry. You are an awesome writer. |
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