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Second Best
Contributed by
justjonesy
on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:30:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Does your face still light up? Do you still begin to laugh when you watch the video and look at the photograph?
Of that night when we danced like there was no rest That night I forgot what its like to be second best
Does your body still fill with butterflies? Do your eyes still begin to wet when you remember that night when we first met?
Well, today you flew back to your home and to your guy But ill have no regrets when I look to that sky
Time cheated us once again we knew this day would suck But Im not saying "goodbye" ...Im wishing you luck
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justjonesy
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2005-01-01 17:30:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:37:33 PM AEST (User
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wounderful work keep it up! |
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:45:50 PM AEST (User
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i have a poem called second best except mine is comepletely opposite to yours. good poem and check mine out sometime. :-D
*Brenna* |
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Re: Second Best
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:51:30 PM AEST (User
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Nice flow. I like this one. |
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