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Look Back Just Once
Contributed by
twitch06
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I fall to the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
Like putting salt in an open wound.
It hurts, stings, and makes me nauseous,
Just to see you walk away and not look back.
I loved you, helped you, and I cared for you when
No one else would. What happened with those
Happy, fun, and exciting times?
When will you look back and see me
In pain, and the burning tears running down my face?
Will that make you feel better?
To see me in pain, and just leave me here, in Solitude?
Or do you just leave when someone cares for you deeply?
You keep walking like nothing happened between us.
While Im still on the ground with my fists and teeth clenched,
And my face is scared with the tears you let loose.
Please look back and see me again.
Give me another chance to be with you, love you
And care for you again.
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twitch06
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Re: Look Back Just Once
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by StrwBrryStrBrst0225 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:25:07 PM AEST
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I feel like crying.. but then again i have always been pathetic like that.... my bf cheated on me and thats basicly how i felt
(your poem) And i woulda have done anything for him, he was my everything and he just watched me suffer, and i just let it happen.... : ( i'm sorry i'll stop talking bout it.... nice poem I liked it , thankz for the write |
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Re: Look Back Just Once
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:52:51 PM AEST
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this is a very sad write but a very good one .. Yeah i know this feeling well so i can relate.. someday you will meet the right one.. i think everything happens for a reason sometimes we don't understand the reasons but i guess we all will later on.. im feeling that way now myself so i understand you very much and i hope you can get past this and better days are ahead for you
Peace and hope
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Re: Look Back Just Once
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:12:46 PM AEST
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Dont wait.....
Umang. |
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Re: Look Back Just Once
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:30:59 AM AEST
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Agonizing yet beautifully written.
A masterpeice 'cause u paint this word picture very well. Reminds me of my self when I was mucho younger. great1
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
I pray u get yor hearts desire if it be God's will. |
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