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My Poetry
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:46:22 PM in AEST
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Dark thoughts in
The darkest hours
Painted on the faces of
Everyone who dared anger
Me
The most melancholy of
Thoughts
Conveyed to words
Through countless hours
The pen flows
Continuously dipped in the inkwell
And draws the blood that is
My Poetry
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2005-01-01 21:46:22]
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Re: My Poetry
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i loved the last stanza. what campaign are you and ghosty doing? |
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Re: My Poetry
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:38:27 PM AEST
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| This is a good write..You have great flow involved in it..Your poetry works. |
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Re: My Poetry
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:56:59 PM AEST
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Thank you so much, Mason!
Yes, this is really a good poem.
You got it, man.
A helluva job.
I will help you make an banner,
let me know if you have an image
for me to use.
Email it to me, or put it up on Poetry Fiends.
--Ghosty |
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Re: My Poetry
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:58:11 PM AEST
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| an excellent tribute to mothy, he is very deserving for what he does here. keeping the rest of us sane and angry!!!! God, how i love that damn moth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: My Poetry
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:57:19 AM AEST
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The pen flows
Continuously dipped in the inkwell
And draws the blood that is
My Poetry
you could have posted this alone and I would have been more than impressed.
Very well done
Barkeep! a drink for my friend
Larry
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Re: My Poetry
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by wray on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 05:13:08 AM AEST
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| Lovely piece ~ exactly right, exactly true. Final stanza is beautiful. |
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Re: My Poetry
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:24:01 PM AEST
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brilliant and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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