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Look What You Did
Contributed by
punkhead13
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:39:06 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Every one is mad at me for some thing I didn't do. All I have to say is thank you. Thank you for being the one who makes me cry. Thank you for makeing me say fare-well and good-bye. Thank you for being the last person I'd ever turn to. But now I'm not to sure about what to do. I can't turn to you because our relationship is through. Who do I turn to when nobody is there, when no body is there to help me through this. Should I do a dare. Do I dare try and talk to you again? How do I know if you will be a friend? I thought I could trust you but then you proved me rong. You made me feel like i didn't belong. Your were the last person I'd expect this from. You made me feel like I was just scum, scum on some ones sheo in this game of life.You better hope the next person you do this to doesn't go for a nife.
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Re: Look What You Did
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:43:57 PM AEST
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Ok first off, once I could seperate the lines in my head I thought it was great...but just a heads up, take some time to get what you want to say across, type it correctly, make sure of your spelling, and press the enter/return button on the keyboard after each line you type...I read on here somewhere that newer members may get kicked off for these small errors...This was an excellent piece though
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