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My gift
Contributed by
darkplaidbabe
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:52:02 PM in AEST
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Dont touch me
Youre no longer allowed
Before it happened I use to be so proud
I had it pretty hard but I still couldve been all right
If you hadnt ruined me, that dark summer night
I was just a little girl but I guess you didnt care
You used me and when you were done, you left me lying there
Now my greatest treasure that was my god given right to give
Youve used for your own pleasure and Ive lost my will to live
Now I feel dirty, disgusting, raw
Not only can I not forget what you did, but what I saw
The look in your eyes, of violence and lust
It traumatized me and now Ive lost all my trust
Im afraid to be near a man, or even be alone
Every time it rings, Im afraid its you on the phone
I see you at parties or in the park
Youre imprinted in my mind, I see you in the dark
I couldve saved it for my husband or at least someone I loved
But you stripped me of that right, now I feel inadequate like im not enough
You raped me, stole away my innocence
I wanted my first time to be gentle yet intense
But it wasnt like that at all, in fact I didnt even have a choice
You silenced my protests with a knife to my throat, and Ive never regained my voice
Well I certainly hope you go to hell, id like to watch you burn
Youve stolen a gift that belonged to me, a gift that cant be returned
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2005-01-02 15:52:02]
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Re: My gift
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by poetmarie on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:56:28 PM AEST
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| Very intense and powerful. So tragic. Well written and one I can identify with - to a point. I don't know if this actually happened to you but I know that pain - I was raped too. |
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Re: My gift
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:03:04 PM AEST
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Yes, almost all and any of my poems are true stories. thanks for commenting!
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Re: My gift
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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Beautifuly written and intencely felt, i'm sorry 4 your pain . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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