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When everything goes wrong...
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look at me sitting back without a care,
I laugh when all you people stare,
But the fact is I'm not so strong,
Frequently I take hits from the bong,
Because emotionally I'm one big wreck,
Every relationship I had just made me upset,
I'm a sheep wandering in a field of wolves,
Suicide was a joke, but now I got nutin left to lose,
The one person I ever loved with my heart,
Left me dying, because I tore her apart,
I was never there to comfort her,
And now I'm dying on the curb
I'm losing this lost reality into a whirlpool of insanity,
Trying to escape frantically, Losing control manically,
Confronting my false vanity, Where are you reality?
I cant stop stealing everything from my parents,
Even though I love them, theres interference,
My minds so wrecked, I'm riding a horse without a saddle,
So pumped full of drugs, shake me and I'll rattle,
Ganja, Alcohol and Anti Depresents make me smile,
But behind that grin, I'm still gonna be drowning for a while,
I've stopped caring about everything and anything,
The past keeps projecting all my notorious sins,
Everythings so goddamn poignant and jaded,
It feels like my entire soul is bleeding and shaded,
I just cant stop thinking of the ways I was hurt,
And they way that I hurt everyone around me
I'm losing this lost reality into a whirlpool of insanity,
Trying to escape frantically, Losing control manically,
Confronting my false vanity, Where are you reality?
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2005-01-02 17:12:59]
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Re: When everything goes wrong...
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by x-fetuseater4life-x on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:44:44 PM AEST
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| drugs arent ur problem....ur just using them wrong. use drugs to have fun, not to hide pain. im sorry ur having a hard time, try pinapples....they always make me smile. ur writing is good, it kept me entertained, thats more than usual |
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Re: When everything goes wrong...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:16:44 PM AEST
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| use drugs for fun? thats stupid and insane. drugs get you nowhere but where you dont want to eventually. excellent write. well written and captivating. |
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Re: When everything goes wrong...
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:37:39 PM AEST
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well I wouldnt say all drugs are bad, just to plae my vote...But this write IS amazing.
I'm losing this lost reality into a whirlpool of insanity,
Trying to escape frantically, Losing control manically,
Confronting my false vanity, Where are you reality?
I absolutly love it. : )
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