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a different color of love
Contributed by
x-fetuseater4life-x
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:35:42 PM in AEST
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you-
beautiful and kind
a warm and helpful smile.
holding you behing closed doors
i love you all the while.
did u know ive never been this happy
just lying next to you?
a sweet melting sensation
heavy hands feel me through.
romantic talk,
sudden utter silence.
express my love in words
...in what may seem like violence.
blood that tastes like sugar
whens mine always tasted like death.
light and simple cuts
not meant to compromise health.
living on your heart beat,
your breathe blowing in my ear.
so scared i could someday lose you
so much more void of fear.
probably a better person
almost sure its true.
if not better, happier.
cant say much more than, i love you.
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Re: a different color of love
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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| heartfelt, but also very deep, awesome |
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Re: a different color of love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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So true and it rings. I hope he read this.
best of luck! |
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Re: a different color of love
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:18:36 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. I really like this poem. Good job. |
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Re: a different color of love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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| Such a sweet and romantic write! I really liked it. Nice work. |
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Re: a different color of love
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:50:55 PM AEST
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i hated this poem.
Imagine dippppping your hannnnd into
Liquid Nitrogen...
So cold it crystalizes
splinters in shards
texture so rough like broken cheerios
Convulse and shatter
and never isosceles
Such then, friend of equilateral...
does my heart
when I read this poem...
and that cold feeling in my gutttttt
my ear canal my capilaries
are dripping slipping sliding down.........
my intestines are barbed wire
throttling my spine
This is a silent rape, dear,
wherein asphyxiation settles wild eyes
with hand over mouth and nose and
toes are no longer moving but for such lurching thrusting.
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Re: a different color of love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 01:00:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem.. I liked it..
Take care
Christina |
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