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No Longer Taking It
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 06:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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No Longer Taking It
I'm sick of this
Really tired of it
All of you asking for comments
For your pathetic little sonnets
It's nice that you use please
But it's still pathetic to me
To get a comment
Write to deserve it
Quit stealing attention
You don't deserve it
What's annoying
Is the begging
What's appauling
Is the demanding
What goes around
Comes around
But that you haven't found
None are sent
From you
But you beg for comments
Even if they're not true
For too long I've tried
To hold this in every time
You're only getting sympathy
And now no longer from me
Because I'm sick of your ****
And I'm no longer taking it
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-02 18:28:57]
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:12:55 PM AEST
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| You know now here is one i can give fifty f-ucking comments to..Great post great poem..I love the edge u had in this..Last line rocks.. |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:13:54 PM AEST
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| yeah i agree but shill out ok coz i do beg alot ok |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by poetmarie on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:26:30 PM AEST
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| Lots of edge in this one. I like it. There's so much said here. Quite appropriate for the latest banter on this site. |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by subchild on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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| Great write..Keep this style up |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by Unheard_Mute on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:12:50 PM AEST
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| lol in truth jen, I was worried you were talking about me at first... |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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I read much more writes here than I comment but when I catch my commenting up then the comments start pouring in. I've been here for years so my advice is if they won't comments they need to give comments. I sit at my putor 24/7 when I'm awake. I vollenteered on a couple places that I post.
But if a pperson wont' a comment they need to give comments.
Very good write here my friend.
Keep up the great writing.
huggs, smiles, luv,emy |
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Re: No Longer Taking It
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:47:19 PM AEST
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| I comment a lot and rarely get comments..yet I'm told I'm a good poet.. I'm prolific and delete a lot, it makes some people quite angry and I don't know why unless they're so proud of their own comments on my poetry.. There are cliques here..like it or not it happens to be true..there are favorites.. At the most I've had 12 comments on a poem. Some of you get 20 to 30 comments.. maybe more.. maybe some people have a right to beg..is it really worthy of a poem..????? |
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