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believing
Contributed by
atreyuskye
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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my reality
is a fatality
my mind
won't unwind
my paranoia
is a phobia
what is reality?
is it real?
do you know how you feel?
some thoughts in your head can be fatal
sometimes you treasure them like a baby in a cradle
but they're a fable
concocted by another mind
my reality
is a fatality
my mind
won't unwind
my paranoia
is a phobia
seeing is believing
hearing isn't believing
voices talking in my head
each saying i should be dead
please stop talking this instant
stop talking to me
leave me alone
i need to figure things out on my own
my reality
is a fatality
my mind
won't unwind
my paranoia
is a phobia
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Re: believing
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:58:04 PM AEST
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um....it's ok....but you need to think things through more.....writing is all about choices(like everything else) and sometimes you have to kill what yo think flows....hard to explain.....sometimes adding the dull boring stuff is the key....keep writing....
oh.....and by the way.....paranoid delusions are better than reality.....i've been on both sides....now i just ride the middle.....^_^
always, abraham |
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Re: believing
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:14:06 PM AEST
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| Different, but cool to read, painted odd pictures, but I liked em keep on writing. |
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Re: believing
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:57:00 AM AEST
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Very good writing -n-I luv idions comment.
Sorry 4 not remembering it all.
Your comment had me laughing-n-scratching my head at the same time.
Awesome writing!
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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