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The so called pain in the chest
Contributed by
Nixzy
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:55:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Every time I think of you I get that so called pain in the chest,
Is it trying to tell me something and put my mind to the test?
Im confused as it is and I dont know where I stand,
Maybe its for me to love you and for me to take your hand.
It makes me feel sick inside and my insides start to burn,
Maybe its trying to tell me something that Im supposed to learn,
Its killing me now knowing that Im not with you,
The so called pain in my chest is telling me that I love you.
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Nixzy
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2005-01-02 20:55:14]
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Re: The so called pain in the chest
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:03:49 PM AEST
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| Had that feeling before, sometimes I wished it was heartburn lol, but love does that to people I guess, Exceelent write, short but so full of beautiful feeling, |
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Re: The so called pain in the chest
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:12:39 PM AEST
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| excellent write. nice twist. |
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Re: The so called pain in the chest
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:58:46 PM AEST
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| Aww...sweet write! |
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Re: The so called pain in the chest
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:58:51 AM AEST
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| awwww such a nice poem! TD |
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Re: The so called pain in the chest
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:45:07 AM AEST
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Wow, this write is awesome. It could also be a heart attack. Guess luv is a big heart attack.
Very strong, beautifull, masterpeice!
Luv it!
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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