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Solitary
Contributed by
desperatesoul
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Solitary
Secretly,
I feed on the
Negativity,
of being,
Silently
held in
captivity,
by liquid.
serenity.............
It fills my
Being
Drowning
the meaning,
Scars are remaining,
Due to your,
Soul Draining,
My Aura,
is Raining,
upon your concious,
for the hundredth
time today..........
And you wonder,
how you were
led Astray,
By the one one,
you begged to stay,
Only to be
Pushed Away,
And Betrayed,
And reminded of the
Hell for yourself you've made,
With no one 2
Bekieve in,
Your Numb
and your Hopelessly
Afraid!!!
by: Dana $av $auci
Copyright ©
desperatesoul
... [
2005-01-02 21:29:25]
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Re: Solitary
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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| It's different...I like it alot! |
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Re: Solitary
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:36:22 PM AEST
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| Cool poem, I prefer isolation to mixing being a loner, but I guess not everyone feels the same, awesome pictures painted, feelings written, liked this poem. |
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Re: Solitary
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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| i loved this. i liked how this was written especially. |
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Re: Solitary
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:46:54 PM AEST
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I can relate to this mood in some way, especially right now. Though I didn't beg, I paid anyway.
Good write though. Fits my dark mood.
Cheers. |
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Re: Solitary
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:29:36 AM AEST
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Very interesting thoughts.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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