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Hate
Contributed by
meganloberg
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Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Not Again,
I thought I was Over This,
A Passed Phase,
A Done Stage,
One Word, One Comment, One Mistake
And I'm Back,
Almost,
Not Really Back At All,
I Need To Leave,
A Feeling of Sickness Haunting My Thoughts,
A Need To Escape
But I Can't
I can Only Stay,
Insulting Myself,
Putting Me Down,
I'm Sick of me,
Ugliness and Hate,
Sickly Trying to Impress,
The friends that I Don't Have,
Impressing Myself,
Proud for Not Breaking Down,
No Crying,
For Crying is Weakness,
Weakness I Hate,
I am a Picture of Hate,
Hated, Hater,
I need to Leave,
But Nowhere to go.
Copyright ©
meganloberg
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2005-01-02 22:45:24]
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Re: Hate
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:52:22 PM AEST
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Great poem...
Each line flows great into the following line and each little word is essential.
Good job. |
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Re: Hate
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:10:25 PM AEST
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| This is not only great, but it captures a feeling that many have..including me.. |
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