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Hardcore Diminish
Contributed by
frickinflamer
on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hardcore diminish
Kiss your lips,
Your glowing eyes.
Hold your hips,
Feel your thighs.
Thats the way I want it to go,
With your tongue with mine,
I want it all to show.
Your skin glowing with shine.
Hardcore diminish,
You fade away.
Come with me and make your wish.
You are my love and prey.
Rub against,
Radiating heat
Hardcore diminish is what I sensed.
Your tongue so sweet.
Ill give you affection,
If you give me yourself.
Give me perfection,
And Ill give you protection.
Dont fade away,
Stay right here.
Give me a day,
And Ill give you a year.
Come with me,
Into my car.
Ill let you see.
I can make you feel something afar.
I need your stroke.
I need you tonight.
In the morning I awoke
Caressed youre though the night.
Hardcore diminish give me worship,
Ill make your scream,
Give me a nip,
And Ill give you a dream.
Make you wiggle,
Make you coo,
Make you struggle,
Ill give you a new view.
Hardcore diminish fade away,
Better than before,
Come back here and stay,
Come to the bed and dont forget to shut the door.
Bounce up,
Fall down.
Scream my name-what?
You can have your crown.
An essence of your sweat,
Twisted and breathing.
Ill make you never forget.
Give me sheathing.
Blankets and sheets,
The waterbed.
Candy and sweets,
Just go ahead.
Missing your feel,
Dont pull away.
What is the deal?
Day by day?
Hardcore diminish,
I say goodbye.
Hardcore diminish.
I dont know why.
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2002-12-02 09:30:00]
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by OreO on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:39:00 AM AEST
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Wow....steamy in here lol...it's an absolutely beautiful write..beautiful visions
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by Euphoria on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed it, love the flow in it..:) |
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by Rage on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:03:36 PM AEST
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Love the sugar and spice in this piece. Great write.
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:59:26 PM AEST
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wasnt this teh one you wrote when you were high or drunk? i like this one. well tootaloo
hug a moose! |
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by bopeep on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:48:21 PM AEST
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| this is the only one of all your poems that i haven't commented on in the past i think. its very thought provoking. I like the flow and the sensual passion that you put into it, very interesting. |
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Re: Hardcore Diminish
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by DistortedSuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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| Love your poems always. I like this one. very umm...sexual. Lol....well bye bye love |
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