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The Truth Behind Her Ending
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:04:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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One day
when she was fourteen
she saw no point
in going on any longer
so she tried suicide
it was the biggest mistake
she has ever made
and she doesn't know why
it just felt right
she was sick of the hate
and the world outside
she was sick of the nights she had cried herself to sleep
she had no idea she was like that
until it happened
so she tried suicide
it was the biggest mistake
she has ever made
and she doesn't know why
it just felt right
she went to school and got picked on
and when she went home she was abused
how could this happen to someone so amazing
we all just guess everyone has something wrong in life
if they would try to get to know her
they would know how good she could be
for once people need to stop and think
what they put others through
because if you dont it will come back to haunt you
now one day when she was seventeen
she was broken hearted and didn't know what to do anymore
so she tried suicide
it was the biggest mistake
she has ever made
and she doesn't know why
it just felt right
but the difference this time was she had succeeded
and no one would say anything
they all knew what was going on
but they didn't care
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2005-01-03 00:04:38]
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Re: The Truth Behind Her Ending
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:08:01 AM AEST
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So sad .It's one of those problems that goes on and on.too bad no one was there for her.
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Re: The Truth Behind Her Ending
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:22:40 AM AEST
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wow this made me teary eyed so sad.. but beautifully expressed.. I can relate to this one except my mom didn't abuse me..
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: The Truth Behind Her Ending
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:22:30 PM AEST
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| heart wrenching. you gain something from mistakes every time, consequences. |
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